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October 29, 2003
a sentence I wrote today
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She fawned; there was no other word for it. It was distracting, and might even fool a man who hadn't grown up around southern women like her: a cross between Lucrezia Borgia and the Avon Lady. Bone and blood, with sugar on top.
from a work in progress © Sara Donati
October 29, 2003 03:31 PM
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I like it. Lucrezia and the Avon lady...Very Good imagery.
Posted by: Christina at October 31, 2003 08:34 AM